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Great!

Definetly different than "Storytime with grandpa" but I still love the characters and expressions you use in your animations. I was expecting to laugh when I noticed the main character looked similar to the grandson, but NOPE. Got a little creeped out instead by the music. Great work though! 10/10

KartuneHustla responds:

Thanks man! Wanted to try something different so people wont be like, bleh you stole from flapjack or something haha! Tired of hearing that crap

Considering this is an early attempt at flash

To be honest, Im half cut. But compared to what I've seen previous to this I'm going to be honest. After that crap I've seen today I was looking for something with a story which, by your intro, I thought this flash had something of. It was terrrrribly short, my first suggestion would be put in the extra few hours of a couple more scenes. Perhaps whats actually inside the house. The ghost being scared seemed like a little extra thing before the story unfolds to keep the viewer interested, not something the entire animation should be based around. Anyways these are my thoughts, considering what I posted on the previous pieces of garbage today I think this is fairly polite. No idead what your intentions of this animation were to be, but I hoped I helped in some way!

Zirch45 responds:

Well, yes and no... I mean so far I've done a Music Video, two parodies, and trailer. I like to keep things different with a short. By the way, what was the "garbage" you viewed?

Pew pew!

Sucks that people give this a one solely based on their dislike of the game :p . I have awarded you a 9 on the other hand! I've worked with claymation and I know just how time consuming it is and I really liked the perspectives and sound you added to yours! I didn't give you a full 10 because you coulda put a liiiil more time in the characters (not saying they were bad by any means though!) keep up the good work!

mattuiop responds:

I totally agree with you! I started animation 4 years ago and I did progress since then as this animation is 20fps. check out the rest of my work. This one was a bit rushed for the work of 4 days!
thank you very much for your comment! if I do make future animation, I will put more detail in my characters. :)

My review

I read your comments and took them into consideration. I actually thought the overall idea was pretty clever based on the criteria you were given. Did you get decent marks for the project? Some quick notes on things I'd change: 1. Add more sound (like you mentioned) 2. Maybe increase the framerate (30 fps seems to be standard these days) 3. Spend a little more time on the environment, for instance the field that the dragon flew over in the beginning could have used a little more depth and detail, as well as the rocks on the mountain instead of just using a radial fill of the same colour on everything. On the plus side! the characters looked pretty good! the "pokemon" style menu looked good, and like I said, the plot was good as well. These are only my opinions though, I'm no master animator or anything haha. Hope my criticism was helpful at least! you should get back into flash (like i recently did) and keep learning! good luck :D

potatoboy37 responds:

Thanks for giving a well thought out review!
yes, i believe i got a 97 out of 100 for missing 2 sound effects where they clearly could've been used.

30 fps! are you crazy?! i woudn't have ever gone that high without someone telling me to!

as for the environment, you are right i should have at least used different fill colors, but for the first scene i thought it was a good way to convey detail without actually using detail, since i had such a short deadline, if i added any more i wouldn't have finished as much as i did. XP
Thanks again! i will keep this stuff in mind whilst i animate!

This is great!

Wow! you just inspired me with the gnarliest fatality ever haha! Spinning cranial sword driver disintegrator!!!!!!

CaptainHicks responds:

I refer to it as the Blender Effect ;)

Great!

This is one of the most solid collabs i've seen in a while! I enjoyed everyone's interpretation of the sound. Totally brightened up my day! I look forward to seeing a lot more of these :D please keep it up!!

Graeme responds:

Not sure how many more there will be. I'd like to do one more next year for sure. Then I'll feel it out from there. I wasn't even planning on doing 2 at first, but the first one was to fun to not do it again!

Woo!

Love destructobox! keep up the good work!

DestructoBox responds:

Appreciate the support dude. Thanks for the review!

Hahaha!

This was pretty good haha, a little more time could have been used on the characters but whatever. JK mom! JK!

Anthonyec responds:

Thanks for the review!

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