Considering this is an early attempt at flash
To be honest, Im half cut. But compared to what I've seen previous to this I'm going to be honest. After that crap I've seen today I was looking for something with a story which, by your intro, I thought this flash had something of. It was terrrrribly short, my first suggestion would be put in the extra few hours of a couple more scenes. Perhaps whats actually inside the house. The ghost being scared seemed like a little extra thing before the story unfolds to keep the viewer interested, not something the entire animation should be based around. Anyways these are my thoughts, considering what I posted on the previous pieces of garbage today I think this is fairly polite. No idead what your intentions of this animation were to be, but I hoped I helped in some way!